Discrimination from genevieve padro on Vimeo.
I still need voiceover and I have a few frames I need to finish.
I think you've developed the storyline pretty well. It's clear what's going on.However, maybe you could revisit some of the transitions? they seem to overlap.Other than that, I think it's looking good! Can't wait to see it with the voiceover!
I think you've developed the storyline pretty well. It's clear what's going on.
ReplyDeleteHowever, maybe you could revisit some of the transitions? they seem to overlap.
Other than that, I think it's looking good!
Can't wait to see it with the voiceover!